BINTI FROM ABROAD

"She says Kitula is so barbaric, she goes by the name of Angel" -Binti from Abroad





Welcome back to my  blog everybody. As an African writer, I've decided to try something new. I have started a hashtag #AfricanTuesdays where I'll be posting an African-themed poem every Tuesday.

So welcome to my first #AfricanTuesdays ever. What do I expect to gain out of this? Well, I'm glad you asked. Being from Tanzania and all, I haven't been able to get the African feeling in most of the poems out there. Don't get me wrong, I know a couple African writers who strive to add that African feel in their poems. Well, I wanted to be one of those. I want to create a space where Africans can read something they can relate to not only emotionally but also culturally.  I mean think about it, Africa to the world. Okay, stop fantasizing now and let's get on with the poem.

Today's #AfricanTuesdays Poem is titled BINTI FROM ABROAD. For some reason binti happens to be my favourite swahili word. It directly translates to someone's daughter. In most cases however, it's used to describe a young lady.  This is a poem of a young lady who lost her identity.
Enjoy.....!!


BINTI FROM ABROAD 

For she has become a Binti from Abroad

Binti walks so majestically,
Like she is scared to touch the ground,
Like the dirt from my sister's child will rub off on her expensive dress,
Like her mother's land is so foreign
Like she has forgotten the ways of the Chagga
She is no longer the girl I used to know
She is now a Binti from Abroad.

Binti sways as she walks,
You may think she's about to fall,
Her long legs so exalted, they carry her firmly,
She wears pointy shoes, the ones that can make you trip, fall and break a few bones,
But binti seems professional with the "shoes" of her days,
Forgive me eh Binti, for my old yet unsophisticated ways,
I respect that you are now a binti from abroad.


Binti colours her face, she paints it up and down,
She says it's beauty and fashion,
And that she's only being seeking to be modern,
Modern day beauty has surely lost it's touch,
Or am I just being primitive?
Her face has lost it's colour,
But she is a Binti from Abroad

I don't know where Binti got blue eyes,
She was born with big and round brown ones,
The ones whose stare can pierce through your soul,
Maybe it's the ride ,
in the white man's metallic bird that flies across the sky,
That destroyed her once mesmerizing eyes.
Or maybe, she is just a binti from abroad.

Binti from Abroad


No I refuse to believe, that my Binti is all gone,
Perhaps it's the food that she ate
Back in the land of the whites
Or the one that she didn't?
Because it makes her fat.
I fear that someday
the wind could blow her away
She never used to be a binti from abroad.

Binti talks weird, they say she has an accent,
She has forgotten the language
That once ran through her blood.
The one that was used to cast away an evil eye
She has forgotten her roots
Perhaps they weren't deep enough
For she has become a binti from abroad.

Binti doesn't want to be called
By her once original name
She says Kitula is so barbaric
She goes by the name of Angel
I heard her friends call her Angelina
She has forgotten the ties held by one's name,
Just like all the bintis from abroad.

Binti is the girl I once promised to marry,
She is my sweet childhood lover,
But like any child, I was allowed to dream,
Because Binti got herself a handsomely pale man,
Who is accustomed to the ways of abroad,
Binti no longer needs me all she sees is my shadow,
But I refuse to give up on this Binti from abroad.

Binti hear my silent cries,
Remember the "promises that never die".
Before you became a binti from abroad
You were my one and true mbege to my throat
Gosh, I can't even be romantic right,
Please look back, forget the ways of the West,
And just be the Binti I've always known.
Be the Binti of the red soils
And not the Binti from Abroad

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So how'd you feel about this Binti? Is she really as lost as described in the poem? Should she abandon the new ways and go back to her original African ways? Or is she misunderstood?
This is the platform where you can express your thoughts by commenting below. Who knows, I could actually write a poem basing on your thoughts.

For next week's #AfricanTuesdays  poem I'll be featuring a great Nigerian Writer. I'm gonna hide his identity for now. Keep you guessing a little bit.  

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See you next week.




     


Comments

  1. I feel like Binti is misunderstood...shes being misjudged but I really love this poem ♥

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    1. I agree. The childhood lover is probably scared to loose the love of his life

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  2. I just love the poem....
    Ur choice of words is outstanding... Creative and amazing

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    1. You know what they say about poetry,.. your choice of words is everything

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  3. For how long has binti been abroad. Prolly she is misunderstood.

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    1. Perhaps binti is actually misunderstood. Poetry open to interpretation anyway

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  4. This is an amazing poem. I absolutely love it. I look forward to more content on the African Tuesdays. The Binti from abroad is misunderstood.

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    1. Maybe the Binti is actually misunderstood, we prolly need to know the other side of the story. I agree

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  5. I look foward go see more from african tuesday

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    1. Yay! More content is coming. Enjoy this for now

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  6. She seems misunderstood..Deep and i love the concept!!different but in a really good way..shows me ur beautiful african side that i just...😳💜

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    1. Perhaps binti is misunderstood. I can't disagree with that. Thank you for your comment subscribe for more content

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  7. An amazing poem lulu, choice of words 👌my attention on African tuesday!

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    1. Asante sana. That's swahili for thank you very much

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  8. OMG... This poem is just a Wow 🤯. Keep it up, can't wait for the next Tuesday.. But I actually think Binti is just misunderstood...

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  9. Great poem.
    I think she is lost callin' her ancient name barbaric. It hurts the binti from home murded by binti from abroad.

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    1. Makes sense. But from a different perspective, what if she's only trying to fit in? Afterall,she was abroad for a while right?

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    2. Makes sense. But from a different perspective, what if she's only trying to fit in? Afterall,she was abroad for a while right?

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  10. Hey, you rock it well! Keep it up. Besides I invite you to "Waka poets platform". Follow us on Instagram and Facebook. A lot has been waiting for you 😊

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    1. Thanks for the invite! I'll surely look into that

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    2. Thanks for invite! I'll be sure to check it out

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  11. Great one. Lovable. I invite to "Waka poets" platform. Follow us on Instagram and Facebook. Thanks

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  12. Awww..this binti from abroad gives me a reflection upon myself just after the abroad stuff 😂(juc kiddn) yoh amazing my lulu en now i c how special yu r... yu r de real Lulu❤ one love👏

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  13. And Binti from Abroad just found a new fan. This is amazing, and a walking work of Art.

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